Work in Progress: Before And After

21 Sep

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2 Responses to “Work in Progress: Before And After”

  1. T.J. September 23, 2010 at 6:41 pm #

    I really liked this. My favorite excerpt: “breath inky, clotted with the catch of want”. SO Vivid. 🙂

    • jhointhecity September 28, 2010 at 2:44 am #

      Thank you! I was hoping people wouldn’t find it too creepy/perverted.

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