Friday’s Poem 12/18/2009: Planned Community, Arizona

18 Dec

* poof *

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2 Responses to “Friday’s Poem 12/18/2009: Planned Community, Arizona”

  1. Mark Olague December 19, 2009 at 3:40 am #

    This poem is perfect Jhoanna. Everything works.

    • jhointhecity December 19, 2009 at 5:32 am #

      Thank you! The first version of this was confusing to some readers (it wasn’t clear who the “workers” were and why they were there – some people thought they were movers) and I was afraid that this version might be too obvious. You’re officially my new favorite reader.

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