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Friday’s Poem: Touching

20 Jan
Touching

          – After Richard Renaldi’s Touching Strangers photographs

If I ask, would you
lay your palm here,
calloused hand
to my shoulder blade,
the delicate armature, see
how my body hooks together
needle and eye?

Or finger
the pulse at my neck,
bird flower
beating its staccato
rhythm rat tat tat?

Cup the living cage
of my throat,
body’s breath,
the slipped passage
of corpuscles. Beneath:
My mother’s voice.
How, in the dark,
I startle awake.

Work in Progress: Swarm

31 Oct

Here’s a brand-new poem. I love it when friends “assign” me an idea for a poem. Keep them coming.

 

Swarm
For Ja’net

The girl’s vacant hands
beat the air, the stick thrown down,
stolid instrument to her impulse

to thump and rattle, thrash and shake.
The bees had their own music,
the dry husk rattle of the thousands

pouring out, their intent bodies
ululating a high-pitched warrior
cry. They descended, an angry mass.

They found purchase on lips
and eyelids, the delicate skin
between the girl’s shirt and pants.

She crushed them as she fell,
lumpen and dark-throated,
into the spoiling leaves.

Work in Progress: Boys on the Subway (revised)

10 Oct

It’s the fall again, or at least it will be if this damn weather stops pretending to be summer. It’s my favorite season. Something about back to school and the cooler weather, the leaves changing and the sky darkening earlier and earlier. The air smells of sharpened pencils and wool sweaters (I think I may have stolen this from You’ve Got Mail, which is one of those ridiculous movies that I can’t NOT watch when it’s on TV. I know. You’re thinking, “Meg Ryan? Tom Hanks? Sheesh.” But if you haven’t watched it, do so. You will thank me. Or we’ll discover that we might not become such great friends).

The wedding is finally behind us (or at least it will be after this weekend’s final celebratory dinner with CityBoy’s East Coast family), and we can both breathe a long sigh of relief. We made it. We’re still talking. We still like each other.

Which means that life can get back on track and we can refocus on the things that we love and make us feel human. For me, this means writing again.

CityBoy’s brother gave a beautiful reading at our ceremony, which of course I loved since he purloined some things from my blog as a jumping point to talk about marriage and relationships. I was compelled to admit that I have shamefully ignored this blog and done very little writing this year. Jobs, and proposals, and travel, got in the way.

So I’m recommitting (again). It’s time to get my ass back in the chair and do what I love best: form words into sentences into stories…”the best words, in the best order.”

My writing friends have been instrumental to the “best order” part. It’s amazing what another set of eyes, eyes you value and admire, can do for your own work. I found the idea of starting with a fresh, blank page a little daunting this morning, so I pulled a new poem out of my waiting-to-be-revised batch and I’m quite pleased with the result. You’ll have to let me know what you think.

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Work in Progress: Boys on the Subway

19 Nov

I’m always checking people out on the subway, much to CityBoy’s chagrin, who maintains that no eye contact is good eye contact on the train. But I can’t help looking. There’s so much strangeness and vulnerability and drama on the subway.

The other day, I watched this young tough size up the young guy sitting next to me on the train. It was chilling to watch him. I almost felt as if I should escort the guy off the train and make sure he got to his destination alright. This is what came to mind when I was sitting my ass in the chair:

 

Boys on the Subway

It’s still the schoolyard, the toughs braced
against the chainlink, the outfits the same—
hooded sweatshirt, a shroud of menace
framing thrust-out chins, their just-cinched
pants straining at the nexus of their crotches ,
stubble pressing through their doughy faces—
everything oversized, unlaced, splayed.
They take up too much, spread their knees
wide across the bench seats, the tongues
of their spit-clean sneakers bright white
against a lunar background of logoed
blacks and grays.  Eager as untrained
pups, their eyes lap up every girl, dissect
their figures into breast sizes, hand spans
of waist, the canted arc of their jeans-
encased asses. They let them know
with licks and swipes of their eyes
which they’d take to a dim corner.

Work in Progress: Before Going to the Front, Hungary, 1916

12 Nov

I was at Strand Books the other day, waiting for none other than Andrew McCarthy (yes, that Andrew McCarthy) to read at a food and travel writing event, when I spied this little volume of photos: André Kertész: The Early Years. It’s a really beautiful little book, full of tiny works, about the size of contact photos. I’d never heard of the photographer before (I’m not that well-versed in the art world though I love photography) and I was struck by how clear and precise his images were. He later moved to larger photos (once he could afford it) but there’s something striking about these little pictures, like the cameos that the Victorians carried on their persons of loved ones. Each photo is like a little memorial. I’ve been flipping through it for inspiration.

Here’s one based on the photograph of the same name:

 

Before Going to the Front, Hungary, 1916

- After André Kertész

The cellist anchors his instrument
in the dirt, its tail spike finding a groove
in the rutted road side, and begins to play,
his finger pads hardened by years of this
action, the alternating bowing and picking, gentle
or savage depending on the piece,
the movement, the wavering pencil work
on his copy of the concerto.

Today he does not need to brush back
his coat tails, wing the twin swallows
of his black-polished tuxedo
before he sits. His soldier’s uniform
is utilitarian olive drab, the buttons
flat discs of wood, his shined boots
the only spangle of ornamentation.

The others, dressed like him,
their knapsacks full of rationed bread,
gather to one side, listen to the rise in his cello’s
open belly, the wild keening he coaxes
stoking their own throats.  Their swallowed
goodbyes blend into the trafficked air.

Work in Progress: The Closing of Taunton State

21 Oct

There was this amazing exhibit by Christopher Payne at the Clic Gallery here in NYC this past spring called “Asylum,” with giant luscious images of abandoned mental hospitals. I’m getting the chills just looking at the images again (you can see and read about it here). It’s stayed with me all these months later and I’ve been tinkering with a poem about it. Here’s what I have so far:

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Work in Progress: Graft

16 Oct

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Work in Progress: The Mango Lady

9 Oct

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Work in Progress: Before And After

21 Sep

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Friday’s Poem 05/21/10: Flat Stanley

22 May

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